2021 年高考英语【热点·重点·难点】专练（浙江专用）
难点 点 13 书面表达之衔接连贯 【 难点释义 】
完成了审题的过程,
有了具体要点和整体布局后,
就要整合信息点,
让庞杂的内容变得富有逻辑性和层次感。在句与句内在衔接的基础上,
做到段落间的起承转合,
使文章有整体性、连贯性。学会正确使用连接词、衔接句,
能为写作助一臂之力。
I. 思维路径 1：
：
连接词 助力语言连贯 在句与句之间、段与段之间恰当地使用一些承上启下的连接性词语是语言连贯性得以实现的最常用手段。连接性词语归纳如下: 1. 起始关系:to begin with, first of all, as we all know, as is known, as is shown in. . . , according to 等。
As we all know, good learning habits contribute to efficient study.
2. 时间顺序:at the beginning, then, later, finally, at last, in the end, afterwards, since then, after that, immediately, meanwhile 等。
At the beginning, I collected all the things scattered in the rooms and put them in place. Then I wiped the dust off all the furniture. After that, I mopped the floor.
3. 条件关系:if,
unless,
in case(of), as/so long as,
on condition that,
provided(that)等。
I would be very grateful if you could meet my uncle at the airport.
4. 转折关系:but, yet, however, while, otherwise, on the contrary, nevertheless 等。
However, not until the match was over did we realize that we lost it.
5. 因果关系:because, as, since, for, thanks to, due to, as a result of, so, therefore, as a result/consequence 等。
Therefore, there is no reason for us to look down upon ordinary jobs.
6. 并列关系:and, or, as well as, not only. . . but also. . . , either. . . or. . . , not. . . but. . . , neither. . . nor. . . 等。
We will have a good time there and I will send you some photos taken there.
7. 递进关系:besides, what’s more, moreover, furthermore, what’s worse, still less, to make matters worse, worse still, more importantly 等。
Many of them can hardly look after themselves, still less manage their own lives.
8. 列举事实:such as, for example/instance, take. . . for example, that is to say, as follows, in other words, on the one hand. . . on the other hand. . . , for one thing. . . for another. . . 等。
On the one hand, I can earn some money by doing it to help my parents;on the other hand, I can gain some experience from it, which will do good to my future life.
9. 表示观点:in my opinion, in my view, from my point of view, as far as I am concerned, as for me, personally等。
As far as I am concerned, they stand for love, friendship and unity.
10. 总结:in short, in brief, in conclusion, in a word, to sum up, all in all, on the whole, in general, generally speaking 等。
All in all, traveling is the best choice for us to enrich our lives and get ready for the new challenges.
II. 思维路径 2：
：
衔接句 助力语篇流畅 1. 引出开头 It is well known to us that. . .
我们都知道…… As far as my knowledge is concerned. . .
据我所知…… Recently the problem of. . .
has been brought into focus.
=Nowadays there is growing concern over the problem of. . .
最近……问题引起了关注 2. 表达不同观点 People’s views on. . .
vary from person to person.
Some hold that. . .
However,
others believe that. . .
People may have different opinions on. . .
人们对……可能会持有不同见解 3. 表示结尾 In short,
it can be said that. . .
总之,
……意思是…… From what has been mentioned above,
we can come to the conclusion that. . .
从上面提到的,
我们可以得出结论…… 4. 提出建议 It is high time that we put an end to the trend.
该是我们停止这一趋势的时候了。
Only in this way can we. . .
只有这样,
我们才能……。
5. 预示后果 Obviously,
if we don’t control the problem,
the chances are that. . .
will lead us in danger.
6. 表示观点 As far as I am concerned/In my opinion. . .
就我来说…… 7. 给出原因或顺序 For one thing,
. . .
for another thing,
. . .
=On the one hand,
. . . on the other hand. . .
一方面……另一方面…… 【语篇锤炼】
请根据上下文填写适当的连接词, 并体会其用法。
Dear Jack,
Thank you for your letter asking about our discussion on low carbon lifestyle. （1）
is something about it.
We should do something to protect our environment. （2）
, we should save water and electricity.
We shouldn’t waste our water. （3）
we should use the same water again and again.
If we leave our room,
we should turn off lights and computer timely. （4）
,
we shouldn’t throw the trash everywhere.
And we should separate the garbage processing. （5）
,
we should use tissue less, and use it again and again.
（6）
,
if we go out, we can go on foot instead of taking cars and we （7）
can go out by bike and bus.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua 答案：
（1）
Here （2）
At first（3）
So （4）
Second（5）
Next （7）also
【 写作实践】
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1. 假定你是新世纪国际学校的学生会主席李华，请写一封英文邀请函，邀请在华外籍学生家长，前来观摩学校即将举办的科技节活动（Science Fair）。
内容包括：
1. 时间地点； 2. 活动目的； 3. 活动安排。
注意：1. 词数 80 左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2.阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
A rock is as big as a house. That’s how the guide book described Giant Rock. Dad said it was carried here by a glacier millions of years ago. I was finally going to see it, on-snowshoes, with my three older cousins, my dad, and my uncle Don. I’d been snowshoeing before, and I liked the adventure of hiking through deep snow alongside wild-animal tracks. At the parking area, after putting on our snowshoes, we studied the map in the information kiosk(亭子). “We start here”, Dad said, “on the red path. Then we turn left onto the purple circle. That’s where Giant Rock is.” “Remember to stick together, guys,” Uncle Don said. The path ran uphill alongside a stone wall. It was easy to follow because red markers were nailed to the trees and the snow had been packed down by other hikers. At the top of the hill, we turned onto the purple path, which wound back and forth, travelling through the hills and gullies. We settled into a rhythm, with Dad and everyone else in front and me in the back, crunch-crunch-crunching through the snow. My cousins were faster than I was, but I managed to keep up. Finally, we reached a hill and saw the massive rock sitting alone in the forest. “It really is as big as a house” my cousin Josh said, gazing up. My cousins and I high-fived(举手击掌)each other and jogged down the slope until we stood at the base, breathless. Standing in the rock"s giant shadow, I noticed the sun had dipped even lower. “Let’s head back,” Dad said after a few minutes. Soon we were crunch-crunch-crunching our way home. I was a little behind the group when I noticed a set of animal tracks I didn’t recognize. I followed them off the path for a closer look. There were no claw marks, which meant they didn’t belong to a dog or a fox. Instead, they looked like tiny handprints and footprints. Must be a raccoon(小熊), I thought. 注意：1. 所续写短文的词数应为 150 左右；
2. 应使用 5 个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语； 3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好； 4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Para l: I looked around when I suddenly realized I was totally alone.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Para 2: Reaching a crossroads, I tried to calm myself down, picturing the map again.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3.阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇 60 词左右的内容概要。
These days, football is one of the most popular sports in the world. Given that Neil Armstrong wanted to take a football to the Moon, we could even say that it is also the most popular sport out of this world! The history of the game goes back over two thousand years to Ancient China. It was then known as cuju(kick ball), a game using a ball of animal skins with hair inside. Goals were hung in the air. Football as we know it today started in Great Britain, where the game was given new rules.
That football is such a simple game to play is perhaps the basis of its popularity. It is also a game that is very cheap to play. You don"t need expensive equipment; even the ball doesn"t have to cost much money. All over the world you can see kids playing to their hearts "content with a ball made of plastic bags; just like Pele did when he was a boy.
Another factor behind football"s global popularity is the creativity and excitement on the field. It is fun enough to attract millions of people. You do not have to be a fan to recognize the skill of professional player-how they use their bodies to pass, score and defend can be amazing to see-or to feel the excitement of a game ending with a surprising twist.
What"s more, football has become one of the best ways for people to communicate: it does not require words,
but everyone understands it. It breaks down walls and brings people together on and off the field. Take, for example, the famous football game on Christmas Day 1914. World War I had broken out months before, but British and German soldiers put down their guns and played football together-one moment of peace to remember during years of conflict.
“Some people believe football is a matter of life and death, ...... “said Bill Shankly, the famous footballer and manager. “I can assure you it is much, much more important than that.” This might sound funny, but one only has to think about the Earth to realize that our planet is shaped like a football. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________