无锡市滨湖中学面表达汇编中考英语专项训练含答案解析
一、中考英语书面表达汇编 1．（·安徽中考模拟）李华的英国笔友 Jessica 来信说, 她想了解中国的传统节日中秋节。假如你是李华, 请你给 Jessica 写一封信, 介绍该节日。内容须包含以下所有要点：
1. 中秋节的时间；
2. 中秋节的传统习俗及庆祝方式：全家人一起吃饭, 赏月, 吃月饼等；
3, 我最期待的活动。
要求：1.80--100 词〔开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数）；2.语句通顺, 意思连贯, 书写工整。
Dear Jessica,
I"m glad to hear from you. Now let me introduce the Mid-Autumn Festival to you._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jessica,
I"m glad to hear from you. Now let me introduce the Mid-Autumn Festival to you. The Mid-Autumn Festival falls on the 15 th
of the 8 th
lunar month. It’s a big day for us Chinese people. All the family members get together to celebrate the festival. In the evening, we usually have a big dinner. And then we go outside and enjoy the full moon. The moon that night looks the brightest. With the beautiful moon up in the sky, we sit together to eat mooncakes, and share our stories.
For me, the best part is to enjoy the moon and eat mooncakes. Mooncakes taste very delicious. They look like the moon, big and round.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【详解】
本篇写作是以书信的方式向笔友介绍中国的传统节日中秋节，要用一般现在时来写。全文可分两大部分，第一部分写中秋节的时间、传统习俗及庆祝方式，第二部分写我最期待的
活动。
亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好地完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态，主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如 get together，enjoy the full moon， share our stories 等。增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，句子通顺，行文连贯。
2．（·北京中考模拟）“书山有路勤为径, 学海无涯苦作舟”, 成功不会从天而降, 美好的未来需要靠不断努力来创造｡
某英文网站正在开展以“天道酬勤” 为主题的征文活动｡假如你是李华, 请用英文写一篇短文投稿, 讲述你通过勤奋, 取得进步甚至成功的经历, 并谈谈你的感受｡
提示词语: diligence （勤奋）, make progress, effort, proud
提示问题: • What did you achieve by working hard?
• What did you do to make it?
• How did you feel about it?
【答案】Diligence is a must for us to reach our goals. I never realized it until I tried every effort to win the English speech competition last year.
It was quite a big challenge for me because I was not that confident about my oral English and I was shy to speak in public. To give a better performance, I made full use of my spare time to prepare for it. I recorded my lines and asked my foreign teacher to correct my pronunciation. Then I kept practising day and night. Besides, I seized every chance to speak in front of my family or friends. The more I practised, the more confident I became. In the end, I won the competition and got a prize.
It was so great that all my efforts paid off. I felt so proud of myself.
【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇话题作文，根据材料中的相关信息介绍一下你通过勤奋, 取得进步甚至成功的经历。所提供的材料中列举了“书山有路勤为径, 学海无涯苦作舟”, 成功不会从天而降, 美好的未来需要靠不断努力来创造。主要从：你努力工作取得了什么成绩？•你是怎么做到的？•你觉得怎么样？这几个方面去介绍。时态为一般过去时，人称为第一人称。注意作文中必须包含材料和提示词的所有信息，并适当发挥。写作时，避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。
【高分句型一】
It was quite a big challenge for me because I was not that confident about my oral English and I was shy to speak in public. 这对我来说是一个很大的挑战，因为我对自己的英语口语没有那么自信，在公共场合说话也很害羞。
句子 because I was not that confident about my oral English and I was shy to speak in public.是由 because 引导的原因状语从句。
【高分句型二】
The more I practised, the more confident I became. 我练习得越多，就越自信。
这句话用到了“the+比较级，the+比较级”结构。表示“越……，就越……”的意思。
3．（·全国中考模拟）中共十八届五中全会提出一对夫妇可生育两个孩子政策后,全社会展开了热烈的讨论,某校也就"是否想要个弟弟或妹妹"对部分学生进行了一次问卷调查,请你根据此结果写一份调查报告,并适当阐述你的观点,问卷调查结果如图所示：
Do you want a little brother or sister?
Do you want a little brother or sister?
For（40%）
For（40%）
against（60%）
against（60%）
1.not feel lonely any more
2.Help each other, share the happiness and sadness
3.……
1.not feel lonely any more
2.Help each other, share the happiness and sadness
3.……
1.worry about parents’ love
2.Bother（打扰）
his/her studying
3.……
1.worry about parents’ love
2.Bother（打扰）
his/her studying
3.……
注意：1.全文字数 90 词左右；
2.条理清楚,书写工整,句式规范,标点符号和大小写使用正确；
3.短文中不能出现真实的人名、地名。
【答案】Recently, a survey has been made in our school on whether you want a little brother or sister. Different people have different opinions. About forty percent students think it’s good to
have a brother or sister. They can help each other and share the happiness and sadness together. And they won’t feel lonely any more. What’s more, they think they’ll get more freedom. But others disagree. They think they won’t get used to the change. They also worry that their parents won’t love them as much as before. Besides, they’re afraid that the new baby will be so noisy that it may bother their study. In my opinion, it’s hard to say whether it’s good or bad to have a brother or sister. But we should respect our parents’ choices. After all, they’re the persons who will make the final decision.
【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇图表作文。内容是某校就"是否想要个弟弟或妹妹"对部分学生进行的一次问卷调查，写一份调查报告，并适当阐述你的观点。时态主要为一般现在时和一般将来时。人称主要为第一、三人称。仔细阅读所给材料，认真审题，确定主题，根据主题和所给要点列出提纲，可适当发挥。但短文必须包含有要点。字数应在 90 词左右。尽量使用高分句型。要运用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有连贯性。根据提示要点，列出本文的写作提纲。写完以后，注意再读一遍，看看有无单词拼写、标点、语法错误（时态、主谓一致等）。
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1．调查结果；40%支持：不再孤独，彼此帮助，分享喜忧．60%反对：担心父母的爱，打扰学习…
2．你的观点
常用到的重点短语：
get used to 习惯于
what"s more 再者
after all 毕竟
as…as 一样…
本文提纲：
最近，我们学校做了一项关于你想要一个弟弟还是妹妹的调查。不同的人有不同的意见。大约 40%的学生认为有兄弟姐妹是件好事。他们可以互相帮助，一起分享快乐和悲伤。他们不会再感到孤独了。更重要的是，他们认为他们会得到更多的自由。但其他人不同意。他们认为他们不会适应这种变化。他们也担心他们的父母不会像以前那样爱他们。另外，他们担心新出生的孩子会吵得他们学习不方便。在我看来，很难说有兄弟姐妹是好是坏。但我们应该尊重父母的选择。毕竟，他们是最终决定的人。
【高分句型】
1．Besides，they"re afraid①that the new baby will be②so noisy that it may bother their study．
①that 引导的宾语从句．
②so…that 如此…以致于…，that 引导的结果状语从句．
2．In my opinion，①it"s hard to say ②whether it"s good or bad to have a brother or sister．
①it 是形式主语，动词不定式是真正主语．
②say 后面是 whether 引导的宾语从句．
3．①After all，they"re the persons ②who will make the final decision．
①after all 毕竟，做插入语．
②who 作为关系词的定语从句，修饰先行词 presons，who 作为从句的主语．
【点睛】
本文思路清晰，时态运用要正确，叙述清楚条里，层次分明，所用句式句型比较高级。书面表达题要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和高分句式，语言要规范，信息表达清晰、完整，意思连贯。要学以致用。注意书写的规范：大小写、标点符号等的正确运用。注意检查：单词拼写、语法、动词时态、语序、主谓一致等。
4．（·广东中考模拟）书面表达
假如你是李明，你的英国笔友 Jack 来信询问你的家乡是否有雾霾天气，情况如何。请你按照以下提示给他回一封 e-mail。
内容如下：
1. 由于大气污染程度十分严重，去年已发生数次雾霾天气；
2. 人们已经意识到雾霾天气的危害，正在采取各种措施减少其发生；
3. 你在日常生活中打算为此做些什么。
参考词汇：雾霾 haze
注意：
1. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；
2. 语言通顺，句子连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；
3. 词数 80 左右，信件的开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jack,
I’m glad to receive your letter, and thank you for your caring for the weather and my health. Now I’d like to tell you something about the haze. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Ming
【答案】Dear Jack,
I’m glad to receive your letter, and thank you for your caring for the weather and my health. Now I’d like to tell you something about the haze.
The hazy weather has occurred a lot of times in my hometown since last year. It was bad for our daily life. More and more people have to go to see the doctor due to the serious diseases caused by the haze. A great number of people have to stay at home .
People all over the country are taking measures to reduce the hazy weather now. The
government suggests that people go to work or school by public transport, such as the bus and the subway.
As for me, I will go to school by bike or on foot. In addition, I will tell the people I meet to protect the environment. Would you like to tell me some good ideas? I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Ming
【解析】
【详解】
这篇作文要求我们以李明的身份给自己的英国笔友写信，告诉他关于家乡雾霾的情况。题目中列出了三个要点，我们应根据这些要点提示，来组织语言，充实内容。首先介绍去年家乡的雾霾情况严重；然后介绍为减少雾霾人们采取了一些措施；最后介绍一下你自己在日常生活中应该怎么做。因此文章应主要分成三段，一个内容一段。文章内容中叙述的情况不一，时态不能统一，根据表达的需要使用正确的时态，注意谓语动词的正确形式。写作时，应注意英语句式表达习惯和汉语是不同的，不能逐词翻译，应从句子的整体考虑，写完整的句子，利用简单句的基本句型，使用恰当的词汇和短语。为提升文章档次，可以穿插使用并列句和复合句；语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使文意连贯，表达流畅。
【点睛】
这是一篇优秀的作文，短文中作者根据题目要求介绍了自己家乡治理雾霾的情况，并结合自身的实际情况，讲述了自己日常生活中是如何做的。首先短文内容完整，包含了题目中要求的所有信息，没有遗漏要点；且文章结构清晰，分成了三段，每一段的中心明确，意思表达清楚、明了。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，作者根据表达需要使用了一般过去时、一般将来时态和一般将来时态，动词形式变化准确，语法规范。短文中语言得体，句式表达符合英语的习惯。句子结构以简单句为主，也使用了一些并列句和复合句，长短句结合，使文章富有节奏。短文中较好的句式有 More and more people have to go to see the doctor due to the serious diseases caused by the haze、People all over the country are taking measures to reduce the hazy weather now. 、The government suggests that people go to work or school by public transport, such as the bus and the subway、In addition, I will tell the people I meet to protect the environment.等。
5．（·陕西师大附中中考模拟）书面表达
初中就要毕业了，校报“英语角”栏目向同学们征集毕业晚会的计划。假定你是李明，请根据要点写一封信，说说你的计划。
要求：1.写作要点都必须用上；紧扣主题，适当发挥；
2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和地名；
4. 词数不少于 70 词。（开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数）
Dear editor,
I am very happy to have the chance to show my plan for the graduation party.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Ming
【答案】Dear editor，
I"m very happy to have the chance to show you my plan for the evening party．It will be held in our school hall at 7 o’clock,on June 22n．I have planned three activities for it．First of a11，we would like to invite our teachers to come．We will give each other gifts and give our best wishes.After that，one of the students will read a thank-you letter to all the people who have helped us．In the end，some pictures will be shown to share the happy times we have had together．
This is what we will do．I hope you will choose my plan．
Yours，
Li Ming
【解析】
【详解】
初中就要毕业了，校报“英语角”栏目向同学们征集毕业晚会的计划。假定你是李明，请根据要点写一封信，说说你的计划。本题是一篇图表作文，信息提示简洁明了，但是必要的补充和想象是必不可少的，切忌照信息翻译句子，必须通过适当的连词保证文章通顺，就本题而言，介绍三项活动时，要有必要的顺序词．
【点睛】
文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少,如：After that，one of the students will
read a thank-you letter to all the people who have helped us；In the end，some pictures will be shown to share the happy times we have had together．文章层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。
6．（·陕西师大附中中考模拟）书面表达
每个人都有自己的梦想和理想，为了理想而努力可以成就一个人的事业。请根据提示内容，以“My Dream”为题，写一篇英文短文，向同学们介绍一下自己的梦想。
要求：1.参考提内容，可适当发挥
2. 语句通顺，意思连贯， 书写工整
3. 文中不得出现任何真实（姓名、校名和地名等）；
4. 词数：不少于 70 词。（开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。）
My Dream
Everybody has his dream. My dream is to be________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】My Dream
Everybody has his dream. My dream is to be a writer when I grow up.I really like writing becauseit is amazing to share my thoughts and feelings with others.
To realize my dream,I’m going to study Chinese hard. It’s very important for me.I am going to read a lot.There are so many great writers that I can always learn a lot from their works.What’s more,I plan to keep on writing so that I can improve my writing through practice.
All in all,I know it is not easy to realize my dream but I will try my best and never give up.
【解析】
【详解】
本文是一篇话题作文。请根据提示内容，以“My Dream”为题，写一篇英文短文，向同学们介绍一下自己的梦想。文章时态用一般现在时，人称主要为第一人称。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并可适当发挥。在写作时，注意紧扣主题，连句成篇，要层次清楚，要点分明，中心突出。同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，最好不要写太长的复合句；尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词，确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。
【点睛】
点睛：首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；最后，要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。
7．（·济阳县第二实验中学中考模拟）书面表达
请根据图片提示，用英语写一篇 120 词左右的短文。
内容包括：
1.完整叙述图片内容；
2.简要陈述个人观点。
要求：1.可进行适当发挥；
2.不得出现真实人名、校名、地名等相关信息。
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】I can see a boy and a girl in the picture. They are coming back from school. On their way home, they find so much rubbish outside the dustbin and decide to put it into the dustbin. The boy also comes up with an idea. He puts up a sign on the dustbin to remind people of protecting the environment. The city is our home. We should protect it. Therefore, when we see someone litter, we should stop them and pick up the rubbish. The environment should be protected by everybody. We should be civilized citizens.
【解析】
【分析】
本文是一篇看图作文。
【详解】
根据题目要求“1.完整叙述图片内容； 2.简要陈述个人观点。”可知，文章用一般现在时。人称是第三人称和第一人称。
英语作文一般分为三个部分：
第一部分：开篇点题——描述图片内容。
按顺序分别描述四幅图的内容：男孩和女孩放学回家的路上，看到垃圾到处都是，女孩捡起垃圾放到了垃圾桶，男孩画了一个标志贴到垃圾桶上。
注意这一部分用用一般现在时。人称是第三人称。
第二部分：文章主体——呼吁大家保护环境。——城市是我家，保护靠大家。
第三部分：总结全文——做合格的市民。
8．（·辽宁初三）
生活中总有些不经意的事让你感动，总有些平凡的人让你难以忘记。白杨是我的同学。她家境贫寒；她精心照顾患病母亲；她学习刻苦，成绩优异；她关心同学，乐于助人；她经常利用空闲时间做志愿者工作。请根据提示内容介绍白杨，并谈一谈她对你及同学们的影响。
There are always some things in life that move you. There are always some people that touch you. ________
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】There are always some things in life that move you. There are always some people that touch you.
My classmate Bai Yang comes from a poor family. She takes good care of her mother who has a serious illness. But she never gives up her studies. She keeps studying hard and has got good grades. What’s more, she cares for the classmates and is ready to help others. During her spare time, she often does voluntary work instead of relaxing herself like most of the students.
She sets a good example to us all. Everyone in our class likes her because of her kindness. In our eyes, she faces difficulties bravely. No matter how hard the life is, she smiles at life brightly.
【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇人物介绍。人物身份为同学白杨，介绍分四个要点：她家境贫寒；她精心照顾患病母亲；她学习刻苦，成绩优异；她关心同学，乐于助人；她经常利用空闲时间做志愿者工作。人称为第三人称，时态为一般现在时。注意语法正确，善用连词，使各个要点连贯。
【高分句型一】She takes good care of her mother who has a serious illness.她精心照顾生病的母亲。who has a serious illness 为定语从句。
【高分句型二】No matter how hard the life is, she smiles at life brightly.不管生活多么艰苦，她仍然笑对生活。No matter how hard the life is 为让步状语从句。
9．（·全国中考模拟）微笑是人类最美的语言。某英文报以“Smiles”为题,举办中学生征文活动。请根据下面的图表信息,写一篇英语短文。内容包括：微笑的力量、你的微笑故亊以及故事给予你的启示。
提示：1.短文应包括图表中的全部信息,条理清楚,行文连贯；2.短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名；
3.词
数不少于 80。
【答案】Smiles
A smile is the most beautiful language of human beings. A smile is like the sunshine in winter. It warms our hearts and helps us get on well with each other. A person who often smiles usually brings good luck. What’s more, smile can give us confidence.
When I was young, I was very shy. I was afraid to speak in public. One day, I needed to give a speech in my English class. I was so frighten that I did badly at the beginning. But when I saw a big smile on my teacher’s face, I got more and more confident. Finally, I made it.
Smiles are very helpful in our daily lives. We should often keep smiles on our faces, If we are happy, we smile. If we meet difficulties, we should smile, too. Let’s smile to life.
【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇图表作文。要求以“Smiles”为题，根据图表提示信息，写一篇英语短文。内容包括：微笑的力量、你的微笑故亊以及故事给予你的启示。根据所给的提示材料可知文章时态主要用一般现在时和一般过去时，人称主要用第一人称。在写作时，注意连句成篇，保持文章的连贯性，要层次清楚，要点分明，中心突出。同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，最好不要写太长的复合句；尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词，确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。
【点睛】
首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；同时注意语句要通顺，词汇书写无误，不要出现语法错误。最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。
10．（·山东中考模拟）为了宣传和弘扬中华优秀传统文化, 某双语杂志将举办征文活动来介绍中国的经典故事, “程门立雪（Stand in the snow to wait for Master Cheng respectfully）”是其中一个选题。请你根据下面的内容提示, 用英语写一篇短文参加此活动。
内容提示：
1. 杨时去拜见老师程颐一老师在睡觉一杨时在雪地等一老师醒来发现杨时在门口
2. 通过介绍这个故事, 发表你的看法或者观点。
要求：
1. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯：词数：100 左右.
2. 不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称、老师和同学的真实姓名。
【答案】Long long ago, there was a man called Yangshi. Once he went to visit his teacher, Chengyi. Unfortunately, Mr. Cheng was sleeping in the room. He didn’t wake up the teacher. So he stood in front of the gate. At that moment, there were snowflakes flying over his head and it was very cold. But yangshi still stood in the snow until Mr. Cheng woke up. When the teacher woke up, the snow was very deep. Yangshi was like a snowman standing at the gate. Finally, the teacher was moved deeply.
After reading the story, I think we should respect our teacher. We should study hard.
【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇材料作文，主要介绍中国的经典故事, “程门立雪（Stand in the snow to wait for Master Cheng respectfully）”。目的是宣传和弘扬中华优秀传统文化。时态为一般过去时，灵活运用动词的过去式。作文要包含材料上的所有信息，通过介绍这个故事，发表看法或者观点。写作时，避免汉语式英语。注意固定搭配及主谓一致的问题，例如:There was/ were...注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，具有条理性。
11．（·天津中考模拟）
作为中学生该怎么度过自己的闲暇时光？你会推荐什么样的放松方式？理由是什么？请根据以下表格中的信息写一篇文章。
观点
理由
一部分同学喜欢网络和电视
1. 放松,信息量大……
2.可以足不出户和同学乃至陌生人互动……
另一部分同学喜欢亲近家人、自然和读书
1. 与家人相处更加和睦
2. 增长见识，开阔视野
你的思考
……（不少于一点）
参考词汇：增长见识 increase one’s knowledge 开阔视野 open one’s mind
要求：
（1）词数：80～100 个。
（2）短文的题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数。
（3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。
Our society is developing fast. People are getting busier too. As a result, people try to relax in their free time. We students have different ideas of spending our free time.
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【答案】Our society is developing fast People are getting busier too. As a result, people try to relax in their free time. We students have different ideas of spending our free time.
Some classmates like surfing on the Internet and watching TV. They think they can get plenty of information through the Internet and make them relaxed. Besides,it is easy for them to communicate and play with classmates and even strangers without going outside. Others think they should get close to their family,nature,and read a lot. In fact,they are not only good ways to get along better with family members,but also open up their mind and increase their knowledge.
I think we should do sports after school in order to keep healthy. What"s more,we also do after−class activities so that we will have a rich and colourful life.
【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇议论文。以第三人称陈述观点，以第一人称提出思考。主体时态是一般现在时。首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作。在写作时，注意连句成篇，保持文章的连贯性，要层次清楚，要点分明，中心突出。同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，最好不要写太长的复合句；尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词，确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。
12．（·江阴初级中学中考模拟）你是一位九年级的学生李明，你用英语写一封邮件给你的笔友 Amy，感谢她对你关心，并告诉她目前你在全力以赴为中考而学习，并与她交流一下目前的学习和生活情况。要点如下：
（1）. 虽然你大部分功课你都学得比较好，但是你对自己不满意。你认为自己学习上还要多花工夫。
（2）. 你的父母对你严格要求，但是也很关心你。（举例说明，适当发挥 2—3 句）……
（3）. 老师很乐意帮助你们。他们希望你们实现自己的理想。他们说（适当发挥 2—3句）……
注意：
（1）. 要求语句通顺，意思连贯。
（2）. 第 2 要点和第 3 要点要用 2—3 句话作适当发挥。
（3）. 词数 90 个左右，邮件开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。
Hello!
Dear Amy, thank you for caring.
Now I am working hard for the senior high school entrance examination.
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How about you? I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours
Li Ming
【答案】例文 Hello!
Dear Amy, thank you for caring.
Now I am working hard for the senior high school entrance examination. I have got good results in most of my subjects, but I am not happy with myself. I think I must spend more time on my studies.
My parents are really strict with me. However, they care for me as well. Once upon a time, I failed in my physics exam and felt stressed and sad. They had a close communication with me and helped me solve my problems and cheer up again.
My teachers are also ready to help us. They hope that we can realize our dreams. They tell us to try our best and not to give up. Life is always full of ups and downs. It"s important not to be afraid of any kind of difficulty.
How about you? I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours
Li Ming
【解析】
【详解】
本文属于材料作文，告诉艾米目前你在全力以赴为中考而学习，并与她交流一下目前的学习和生活情况。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。
亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如 get good results, spend+时间+on sth, be strict with, however, care for, as well, once upon a time, help sb do, cheer up, be ready to, tell sb to do, try one’s best to do, be full of 以及 it is adj to do sth 等，增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。
【点睛】
写作时可以从以下几个方面做起：
认真审题。审好题是写好书面表达的关键。审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符合要求。
构思提纲。有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的，而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥，因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。
初写短文。一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。同时还要注意使用恰当的连词，使句子衔接自然。
修改润色。修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，格式是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。
13．（·江苏中考模拟）目前，许多中学生利用周末和节假日上课外补习班，对此人们有不同的看法。请根据下面内容写一篇短文。
赞成者的观点
1.
能够学得更好，考试考得更好，上更好的高中；
2.
避免花太多时间看电视、玩游戏。
反对者的观点
1.
学生需要时间休息；
2.
压力过大不利于身体健康。
你的观点
1.
课堂上好好学就足够了，补课不必要；
2.
课后可以自己......
注意：1. 表达清楚，语法通顺，上下文连贯；
2. 必须包括提示的所有信息，并适当发挥，至少两点；
3. 词数：100 词左右（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
4. 不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
Nowadays, many middle school students are taking all kinds of after-school classes at weekends or on holidays. There are two different opinions about it.
Some people think that
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【答案】Nowadays, many middle school students are taking all kinds of after-school classes at weekends or on holidays. There are two different opinions about it.
Some people think that students can get better exam results and go to better senior high schools by taking extra classes. They also believe that students can avoid watching too much TV or playing computer games in this way.
But others have a different opinion. They think that students need more time to rest. If they take too many classes, they might feel too stressed. That’s not good for their health.
As for me, I don’t think taking extra classes is necessary. Learning hard in class is enough. We just need to go over our lessons after class. We can also teach ourselves as it is very important for us to have a lifelong learning ability.
【解析】
【分析】
整体分析：这是一篇提纲话题作文。是一篇议论文，第一段要写目前，许多中学生利用周末和节假日上课外补习班，对此人们有不同的看法。第二段要写中学生利用周末和节假日上课外补习班赞同者的观点。第三段要写中学生利用周末和节假日上课外补习班反对者的观点。第四段要表述作者自己的观点。
【详解】
写作之前要 1.审清题目，看看有哪些要求？哪些时态？人称？2.确定文章类型，记叙文？说明文？议论文？看图？还是应用文？3.确定时态，单一还是混合。4.写下关键词、短语、句型。5.列出提纲和段落，并运用适当的句型和过渡词衔接。6.根据提纲和段落结构句型及关键词句完成文章。写完后反复阅读修改推敲润色，人称、时态、单复数一致等。运用自然过渡法和自然衔接法来是文章更为地道、通顺、纯正。用短语、句型：all kinds of ，Some ···others，As for me ，Some people think that ···。They also believe that···。If they take too many classes。It is very important for us to have a lifelong learning ability.来增加了文章的亮点。
【点睛】
这类作文的写作方法要注意认真审题，可以分四段写：总体简单描述话题；赞成；反对；你的看法。注意过渡性语言的使用。做到：要点要全，表达要清晰明确，使用短语，句型要准确，注意避免拼写和语法错误。
14．（·广东中考模拟）书面表达
根据要求完成短文写作，请将作文写在答题卡指定的位置上。
生活中常常会发生一些意外的事，但每个人处理事情的方式不同。有些人冷静温和地处理，有些人简单粗暴地对待。当你与人发生冲突时，你会如何处理呢？请你写一篇英语短文，谈谈你的经历与看法。内容包括：
1. 请你简单叙述一次与别人发生冲突的经历；
2. 你认为该如何正确处理日常生活中发生的冲突（至少两点建议）；
3. 呼吁大家友好相处。
作文要求：
1. 不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校真实的名称和学生的真实姓名。
2. 语句连贯，词数 80 左右。作文的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
Life is full of the unexpected, ___________________________________________
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【答案】Life is full of the unexpected. During the basketball game yesterday afternoon, a schoolmate and I hit into each other, trying to catch the ball. Then we started shouting, and it turned into a terrible quarrel. To be honest, it was neither my fault nor the schoolmate’s, only because we both cared too much about winning and losing. That made me feel shameful.
In our daily lives, we should deal with these quarrels properly. Firstly, try to be friendly to each other. Secondly, we should communicate more and put ourselves in other’s place. Don’t be a selfish person and try to deal with everything calmly and wisely.
It’s very important to get on well with each other. Let’s build a friendly, peaceful and safe society together and make our life better and better.
【解析】
【详解】
这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如 full of，during the basketball game，each other，try to do，turn into，to be honest，neither…nor，care about，too much，deal with 等。而固定句型 It’s very important to get on well with each other.和 Don’t be a se...