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假定你是李华,你校学生会需要招聘一名留学生做英语学习顾问,请你以短文形式写一则招聘启事。内容主要包括: 1.母语是英语,汉语流利者优先; 2.解答英语学习问题,协助组织英语活动; 3.每周4小时,报酬面议; 4.联系人:李华(电话:15011223344)。
注意: 1.词数80左右; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
3.参考词汇:英语学习顾问English study adviser
写作指导 招聘启事是用人单位面向社会公开招聘有关人员时使用的一种应用文书。它往往包括公司或者部门的简单介绍,以及所需人才的学历、才能、职责范围等。通常还有招聘单位的地址、电话等信息。通常包括以下几个方面: 一、总述招聘职位基本信息 用一句话总述要招聘的职位,涵盖招聘的基本信息,包括三个方面的内容:招聘单位、招聘对象(如是男还是女,是留学生还是外国人,是志愿者还是兼职等)、工作内容。要求语言简洁,用词精准。
二、详细展开岗位职责和要求 岗位职责(responsibilities)是工作内容的具体化,在分述岗位职责时要注意条理化,避免杂乱和遗漏。岗位要求(requirements)是对招聘对象履行岗位职责的具体条件和要求。
三、介绍招聘单位的联系热线、联系地址、电话号码和简历投递的邮箱等。
审题谋篇 词汇储备 1. main responsibilities主要职责 2.oral English口语 3.organize activities组织活动 4.applicant申请人 5.native本土的 6.fluency流利 7.what＇s more而且;更重要的是 8.payment报酬 词汇运用 1.学生会决定邀请一位留学生来当下学期的英语学习顾问。
The Students＇ Union decides to invite an international student to work as an English study adviser next term. 2.顾问的主要职责包括帮助学生练习他们的英语口语、解答他们的问题以及协助组织英语活动。
The main responsibilities of the adviser are to help students practice their oral English, answer their questions, and organize English activities. 3.顾问预计每周要工作4小时。
The adviser is expected to work 4 hours per week. 4.你感兴趣的话,请拨打15011223344找李华面试。
If you are interested, please call Li Hua at 15011223344 for an interview. 5.服务的报酬可议。
The payment for the service can be negotiable. 句式升级 用include后跟动词-ing形式作宾语改写第2句。
The main responsibilities of the adviser include helping students practice their oral English, answering their questions and organizing English activities. 串句成文 The Students＇ Union decides to invite an international student to work as an English study adviser next term. The main responsibilities of the adviser include helping students practice their oral English, answering their questions, and organizing English activities. The applicant should be a native speaker of English. Fluency in Chinese is preferred. What＇s more, the adviser is expected to work 4 hours per week. If you are interested, please call Li Hua at 15011223344 for an interview. The payment for the service can be negotiable.
阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
The way of Chinese people＇s life has been changed through China＇s four new great inventions. What are the four new great inventions?They are high-speed railways, bicycle-sharing service, online shopping and Alipay. What do the China＇s four new great inventions bring to us? High-speed railways—Modern transportation makes everybody neighbors. The invention of the high-speed railway makes it easy to travel thousands of miles a day. Today China＇s rail transit technology is the best, the China＇s daily average of 4,000 trains sending about 4.6 million passengers. Bicycle sharing service—Short walks become more convenient and faster, and carbon emissions are reduced, which is friendly to the environment. You can download the app about shared bikes, pay some money, and then you can use bicycles everywhere in the street. The Chinese shared bicycle programs have been becoming more and more popular. Online shopping—You don＇t need to go out to find the needs for living. Online shopping, as the name implies, is to pay money online. Purchases(购买物) can be sent home. China has 751 million Internet users, and 724 million mobile phone users; total transactions (交易) on November 11 and December 12 hit a record high every year. Online shopping lets Chinese Internet users enjoy the “shopping carnival” every day. Alipay—A software which can replace cash payment. With smartphones＇ popularization, AliPay has become an indispensable (不可或缺的) app. Through scanning the “QR code”, AliPay wants to realize the ambition of “replacing cash payment” gradually. On 11 November 2018, both the mobile payment account and the transaction reached 213.5 billion yuan. There is no doubt that China has already used its own power of the four new great inventions to become a great powerful technological country, showing the power of China once again.
Step 1 通读全文,理清结构 主旨大意:通过阅读可知文章一共有7段,按照总—分—总的方式来介绍中国的新四大发明。
文章结构:全文分为五个主要部分。
第一部分(第一、二段):China＇s four new great inventions 第二部分(第三段):The invention of high-speed railways. 第三部分(第四段):Bicycle-sharing service. 第四部分(第五、六段):Online shopping and Alipay. 第五部分(第七段):China has already used its own power of the four new great inventions to become a great powerful technological country. Step 2 合并改写,润色升级 要点1:China＇s four new great inventions—High-speed railways, bicycle-sharing service, online shopping and Alipay have changed Chinese people＇s life. (对原文bring...to us语义转换) 要点2:High-speed railways make trips faster than before.(用faster than before替代easy to travel to thousands of miles a day) 要点3:Bicycle-sharing service lets short walks become faster, more convenient and environmentally friendly. (用environmentally friendly 替代friendly to the environment;其他进行语义转换) 要点4:Online shopping creates many business opportunities on the Internet and Alipay will gradually replace cash payment.(用many business opportunities替代total transactions;replace cash payment是同义概括) 要点5:Without doubt, the new four inventions contribute to a great and powerful technological China.(用contribute to a great and powerful technological China替代become a great powerful technological country) Step 3 复查誊写 串句成文并进行仔细检查,可以从以下几方面进行重点检查:①所写概要覆盖了全部要点信息,且各要点的表达相对独立。②语言上没有语法或用词的错误,文章结构紧凑且上下句连续通顺。③标点符号、单词拼写正确。④符合词数要求。最后,检查无误后把初稿誊写到答卷上,保持书写规范,字迹清晰。
China＇s four new great inventions—High-speed railways, bicycle-sharing service, online shopping and Alipay have changed Chinese people＇s life. High-speed railways make trips faster than before. Meanwhile, bicycle-sharing service lets short walks become faster, more convenient and environmentally friendly. Online shopping creates many business opportunities on the Internet and Alipay will gradually replace cash payment. Without doubt, the four new inventions contribute to a great and powerful technological China.
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